Relatable.
The Good: It was Hilarious and I have never seen something like it anywhere else unless in my mind and other peoples minds.
The Bad: Short and I don't like the colours you used.... lol I do but I don't like the way you picked to use them.
How you can improve: Just watch this over and over again and do it again and look at what you don't like about it and add in what you think it needs.